In this passage I will be taking about how; The Great Gatsby is linked to The Curios case of Benjamin Button, I will then furthermore talk about how The Winter Dreams is connected to The curios case of Benjamin Button. My last paragraph will be on the Fitzgerald short story The Ice Palace and how it is linked to The Winter Dreams
During the Great Gatsby, Jay the main character had an always passionate love for Daisy Buchanan. There was also a level mystery about Jay, no one really knew the true story about him , weather if he was a German spy or if he had killed a man or even if he went to oxford . Daisy was an image of Fitzgeralds dream girl and this meant that what she is in real life is different to what she is in the novel
Hi Oliver,
It seems that you have a lot of work to do in the final three hours of this assessment. Please be sure to ask any questions you need to help you write this essay.
You need to be a lot more specific with your introduction. At the moment, I am only guessing at what your connecting feature is from your Gatsby paragraph.
It looks like you need to take another look at the planning sheet that was handed out as it had some helpful information about how to structure your essay.
You want to ensure that you are explaining how the golden girl is presented in each text with a quote to support your observations. You should, in each paragraph, look to compare this with another text and identify how the presentation of each golden girl is similar or different. From there, you want to identify the things that the audience can learn from this character type about themselves and the society they live in.
Mrs. P